Transformers: Generation eXtreme
Mysteries Unfold::a beautiful distant shot of cybertron can be seen from deep space, the view of cybertron enlarges and Unicrons morbid and empty head drifts by::[N] Cybertron, the year: 2005. The...
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Boy...that sucked. You need a lot of help. Sorry, but if you're looking for good criticism, go back to the drawing board and pay heed to continuity, development, and backstory explanation.
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whoa dude. there are plenty of stories that explain what has happened in latter episodes. so just sit tight
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Well, you do have an interesting idea going.The biggest strikes against this, however, totals three: grammatically, spelling, and lack of knowledge in proper scripting. From reading this, I notice...
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...uhh.....yeah....thanks.....by the way, did i mention that this was my first fic and i quickly adapted it from a comic i drew???
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Again, I was just giving you constructive critism...as I tell everyone here, your best friends when writing are a dictionary, a thesaurus, and The Little Brown Handbook. Beta readers don't hurt one...
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uhh....i guess... Also about the grammar and such, i was typing it in a response for another board and when that happens it cuts out some of the letters when i'm typing fast. Just thought i'd let you...
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cool, hope that you post more of the story soon.Bot form the great white north
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interesting, but I would like point out a few things...Megatron is now Galvatron, Starscream will NEVER be accepted into the Decepticon ranks again.....IronHide and Huffer are DEAD....If your going to...
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need i remind you that this is sort of an alternate universe thing.
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We're just giving you feedback, dude...we're not out to get you, only tryintg to help you out in your writing.Perhaps it would have been better if you mentioned it was a.) your first time writing fic,...
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